Saturday, March 3, 2012

STING


 

Damp cloth wipes pale cheek of night’s tears.

Gentle hands unclench spasmed fingers.

Cool linen drawn over body in silent defeat.

The battle bravely fought… now… the end of fears.


Mirrored doors close… motor hums… elevator slices through floors.

Soft thud as gravity announces… doors slide open… basement beckons.

Revenant shadows floating past… ghostly hands outstretched in plea.

Gurney wheels roll with thrum and squeak… down faded corridors.


Soft caress over cooling flesh… sheet floats in silent flight.

Bright fluorescent reflects in dark eyes… orbs unmoving.

Nostrils pinch with acrid disdain… fingers of death’s stench.

Shadow looms overhead… gloved hand holds dancing light.


Sharp sting traverses once proud chest… trailing down abdomen.

Blade whispers, swift and sure... sound chases blooded steel.

Dark red paints pale flesh…river of warmth pools in umbilical’s knot.

Unfeeling hands grasp… rending layers reveal tormented soul within.


Silent scream echoes inside her head.

Protestations unheard.

Comes the final sting.
  
Death’s pride has the last word…



©  2012 – Veronica Marie Lewis-Shaw

9 comments:

  1. This gave me shivers! Wow! What a fantastic poem. Let me know when it wins... :)

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    1. Thank you, Susie... what a wonderfully positive compliment!

      I went through at least a dozen revisions on this... poetry, as witnessed by my blog title... is not my forte. I've written five in my entire life.

      I am pleased I could give you a little shiver! Thank you for visiting my blog. :)

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    2. Wow! I love it the second time too! Amazing....

      Susie Lindau

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  2. yikes... gentle sad poem... I could feel the ride in the hospital... nice work.

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  3. Had to visit for your blog title. Whimsy and death. Powerful partners. Beautiful poem.

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    1. Thank you for visiting my blog, Julia. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

      A friend once made a comment about a limerick I wrote as a joke for him. He said... 'it ain't iambic pentameter, Roni... but I like it!"

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  4. Very creepy. I look forward to reading more of your poems :)

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  5. The descriptions are spot-on. The gurney wheels thrum and squeak really gave me chills. I could hear it so clearly. Well-done!

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